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【英语写作教材】《My Weird Writing Tips》小学生边笑边学的写作秘籍 |
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[attach]55[/attach] 如果你知道《My Weird School》，如果你的孩子看过并且对《My Weird School》一直念念不忘，如果你想让孩子写作文不再犯难，那么，这本书绝对是你的最好选择！ 刷到一篇"我家的仓鼠统治了学校"的小学生作文时，你是否也忍俊不禁？当孩子把《我的妈妈》写成"移动的零食仓库"，你又是否在捧腹之余暗自发愁？别慌！《My Weird Writing Tips》正是一本能让熊孩子们笑着学会写作的魔法书！ ✍️【作者来头不小】 美国童书顶流Dan Gutman出手！这位创作了风靡全美的《My Weird School 疯狂学校》系列的鬼才作家，深谙如何用无厘头幽默征服熊孩子。当其他写作指南还在用"总分总结构"说教时，这位"怪叔叔"已经带着他的香蕉皮式写作法闯进课堂啦！ 📖【内容好笑到犯规】 翻开这本"不正经"写作指南，你将收获： ✅ 用"披萨理论"吃透文章结构（真的会饿！） ✅ 跟着外星人学避免"然后...然后..."流水账 ✅ 在"最烂开头大赛"中领悟黄金三秒法则 ✅ 用表情包思维打造让人过目不忘的细节描写 最绝的是连"老师最恨的20种错误"都变成了搞笑漫画，孩子们边笑边记，不知不觉避开所有写作雷区！ 🎯【效果堪比写作外挂】 当9岁的小侄女用"像被100只考拉抱住的桉树"描写作文里的爸爸时，我终于信了这本书的魔力！它教会孩子的不仅是技巧，更是： 🌟 把生活变成故事的超能力 🌟 让文字跳舞的想象力 🌟 在作文纸上冒险的勇气 那些曾被作文课吓哭的孩子，现在居然追着问："能再写一篇吗？" 💡【特别提示】 这不是一本需要正襟危坐的教科书！建议搭配薯片阅读（作者原话），当孩子在地板上笑到打滚时，请不要惊讶——他们正在经历最快乐的写作启蒙！ 还在为孩子干巴巴的作文发愁？让这个穿着花裤衩教写作的怪叔叔，带你家宝贝开启文字狂欢派对吧！毕竟，会笑的孩子，笔下的世界永远不会枯燥~ 🎉 图片 You probably have mixed feelings about picking up this book. On the one hand, you think it might be funny because you’ve read the My Weird School series. Maybe A.J., Andrea, Michael, Ryan, Alexia, and Neil the nude kid will torment the grown-ups at Ella Mentry School and a lot of silly stuff will go on. On the other hand, it looks like this might be a book about writing. Ugh, disgusting! It’s probably going to be a big borefest—one of those books your mom and dad want you to read because they think it will make you smarter or help you get better grades. The truth is, it’s both. You just might learn something, but you might get a few laughs too. So give it a shot. What have you got to lose? This just might be the greatest book in the history of the world.* 图片 An adjective is a word that describes a noun. Like big describes whale. But all whales are big, so there’s no need to write big whale. Some people will tell you that you should pile on the adjectives to make your story more vivid (or simply longer). Well, how does this sound? The tall, blond, handsome, tired, gawky ten-year-old boy was wearing a new, bright red, flannel shirt as he walked down the dark, forbidding cobblestone street. . . . ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ Oh, sorry, I dozed off there for a moment. Look, who cares what the kid was wearing? What difference does it make what kind of stones were in the street? Get rid of that boring stuff! Get that kid to wherever it is he’s going, have something cool happen there, and move the story along. You don’t have to mention every detail along the way. Readers have imaginations. Let them use them. Elmore Leonard, a very famous author for adults, uses the word hooptedoodle to describe all the boring stuff that is found in so many books. As Leonard puts it, “I try to leave out the part(s) that readers tend to skip.” You don’t want to read hooptedoodle, so don’t write hooptedoodle.
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